Then the bubble burst

Then the bubble burst

A Story by Aldora Sparrow

Two people viewing the same thing, both 14 words



Then the bubble burst

Then the bubble that reflected the world burst



Then the flawless bubble,

Still swirling the multicolored reflections of a perfect world,

B u r s t



Then the flawless bubble burst,

Raining kaleidoscopic drops of perfection

Towards the flowering earth

© 2010 Aldora Sparrow

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Aldora Sparrow
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Wow. interesting. I enjoyed the strange tone of this. It's not quite something I'd ever read before, but I'm glad I did!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Just one. Would a pessimist even see something as being flawless?

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on August 25, 2010
Last Updated on August 25, 2010


Aldora Sparrow
Aldora Sparrow

I have been writing for longer than I can remember, but it was only during 7th grade did I start to write outside of class. I am still inexperienced and I love helpful comments. I love to write fa.. more..


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