Then the bubble burst

Then the bubble burst

A Story by Aldora Sparrow
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Two people viewing the same thing, both 14 words

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Then the bubble burst

Then the bubble that reflected the world burst

 

PESSIMIST:

Then the flawless bubble,

Still swirling the multicolored reflections of a perfect world,

B u r s t

 

OPTIMIST:

Then the flawless bubble burst,

Raining kaleidoscopic drops of perfection

Towards the flowering earth

© 2010 Aldora Sparrow


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Wow. interesting. I enjoyed the strange tone of this. It's not quite something I'd ever read before, but I'm glad I did!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Just one. Would a pessimist even see something as being flawless?

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 25, 2010
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Aldora Sparrow
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I have been writing for longer than I can remember, but it was only during 7th grade did I start to write outside of class. I am still inexperienced and I love helpful comments. I love to write fa.. more..

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