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Shatter Me

Shatter Me

A Poem by Shadow Spirit
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Yea...I'm dying of a 5 year growth of colon cancer....Isn't that nice?

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Long black dress
Tendrils of soft hair
Beautiful indeed
Dressed up for death
I'm ready now, as I start taking steps
I'm all ready now, prepared for what's next
Many have loved and fear to let go
Many sustain and live to make it so
I on the other hand, will die for the free
I on the other hand am shattered inside me
As I walk down the steps, towards my glorious doom
My coffin awaits my cold bodies perfume
I'm ready
Shatter me

© 2012 Shadow Spirit


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I just noticed the note on the cancer. I've known many who get to the point where their strength and power takes over and overcomes the power of the disease. It is a powerful write..raw and wickedly good in expressing that process of all the emotions that go with the release of "Shatter Me".

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You will live on through your writing. Body is temporary, but soul is forever.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Saying "sorry" isn't enough, so I'm not going to. I'm going to wish you the best of luck. Remember that there is always hope for a miracle. Fight, and maybe you'll come through victorious, no matter the odds. Don't give up yet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tragic. I cannot express my sorrow. I seldom can't through anything but tears and I cannot cry through writing so I will use an emoticon. T_T

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh very haunting, and the use of rhyming just increases this feeling. Dark and lovely. I can just see a beautiful girl waiting for death's dark embrace. Loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just noticed the note on the cancer. I've known many who get to the point where their strength and power takes over and overcomes the power of the disease. It is a powerful write..raw and wickedly good in expressing that process of all the emotions that go with the release of "Shatter Me".

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Shadow Spirit
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The thing about humans is, we stumble and crawl, and we get broken. We destroy ourselves. But at the same time, we are amazing. We sparkle like a diamond in the dark rich soil of earth. We never recog.. more..

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