Caring

Caring

A Poem by May

I used to care about you,
Until I realized how pathetic I was
To be crying over someone who simply didn't care.
you hurt me,
you made me feel worthless,
you made me feel stupid,
you made me feel unimportant.
I let you get to me; in fact, 
I let you control me,
But I'm finally moving on.

Although, you did teach me one thing,
to never hold on to someone 
who isn't holding on to you. 
As for me, I know better,
As for you, you lost a person who
Actually cared and loved you.

© 2018 May


Author's Note

May
ignore grammar problems, hope you like it.

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"you hurt me,
you made me feel worthless,
you made me feel stupid,
you made me feel unimportant."

I could feel what was written here. It was so deep and heartfelt.
I struggle with anxiety and depression and it sucks. It's something I'll have to deal with my whole life. But where my source of joy comes from is writing. It helps me understand who I am and what I go through. These words are very real feelings that are very common in todays world. You are an extremely talented writer/author and I just want to let you know that, whenever you are going through something difficult or it just seems to much, just write! It will help you and others around you.
Your writing is incredible and keep up the incredible work!
If you want to, could you read my story, "the blonde girl," you don't have to if you don't want to, I just felt like I should share it with you.

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

I am going through very hard times and I recently started writing and I found it to be so freeing an.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

Trust me, doubts are apart of life and I'm glad that you shared some of your writing because it was .. read more



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Very meaningful and also very true, especially love the part in the end where you say that the person who takes others for granted is the person who actually loses someone who cares.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

thank you so much.
sometimes we just don`t know what we have

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

It is easy to be ignorant of the special people in our life's and we may end up hurting them greatly.. read more
 wordman

6 Years Ago

my pleasure
"you hurt me,
you made me feel worthless,
you made me feel stupid,
you made me feel unimportant."

I could feel what was written here. It was so deep and heartfelt.
I struggle with anxiety and depression and it sucks. It's something I'll have to deal with my whole life. But where my source of joy comes from is writing. It helps me understand who I am and what I go through. These words are very real feelings that are very common in todays world. You are an extremely talented writer/author and I just want to let you know that, whenever you are going through something difficult or it just seems to much, just write! It will help you and others around you.
Your writing is incredible and keep up the incredible work!
If you want to, could you read my story, "the blonde girl," you don't have to if you don't want to, I just felt like I should share it with you.

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

I am going through very hard times and I recently started writing and I found it to be so freeing an.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

Trust me, doubts are apart of life and I'm glad that you shared some of your writing because it was .. read more
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