I don't, at least not much

I don't, at least not much

A Poem by May

I don't cry because of you anymore,
At least not much. 
Because it's not the goodbye that hurts,
But the flashbacks that follow.
I don't think about you anymore, 
At least not much.
Mainly wondering how you've been doing
Because we don't talk anymore
And I still care.
I don't look at you anymore,
At least not much.
Because your body is a magnet
And Im always attracted,
But for you I guess Im a negative
And so are you.

© 2018 May


Author's Note

May
ignore grammar problems, hope you like it.

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Because your body is a magnet
And Im always attracted,
But for you I guess Im a negative
And so are you."

This was so pretty and heartfelt!
It was filled full of emotion and the flow was spot on!
It was a enjoyable read and it had me hooked.
Keep up the incredible work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

thank you so much
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

You are so welcome!



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I truly understand the feelings attached to this piece, I especially love the last few lines "Because your body is a magnet
And Im always attracted,
But for you I guess Im a negative
And so are you."
Beautifully written with a clear image of the meaning

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot. It's a very special piece.
so sad and painful those two strong emotions depicted in the poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sette

6 Years Ago

that i can relate to and understand be strong
May

6 Years Ago

thank you I appreciate it
sette

6 Years Ago

you are most welcome
Because your body is a magnet
And Im always attracted,
But for you I guess Im a negative
And so are you."

This was so pretty and heartfelt!
It was filled full of emotion and the flow was spot on!
It was a enjoyable read and it had me hooked.
Keep up the incredible work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

thank you so much
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

You are so welcome!
Love this
Keep writing
Julie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

thank you, I appreciate your support a lot.
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

6 Years Ago

No worries
I’m an amateur
You good

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