Creativity

Creativity

A Poem by hogan
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Expresses the frustration of unrecognised talent

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Like a hard crystalline wall, touched for the first time,
By the first sunbeams from a dawning, frosty, winter's sun.
Tiny rivulets of iridescence are released, competing,
To be noticed by any who might observe.
That is how the inventions of a creative mind,
Hunger to seek out a sentient entity,
That will receive and analyse the true meaning of their worth.
Mostly, the spectral sparkles pass unnoticed, diluted and diminished

© 2012 hogan


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Author's Note

hogan
Attempt to stir the feelings of those who feel they are unnoticed.

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Pax
do you know the mind is a creepy thing to play with... but it's also a place for something far more vast and beautiful... I love to swim in my thoughts... yet it's tiring of the endless negativity... but then agian i follow the light... this is really facinating write...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hogan

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your encouraging words, I am one of the lucky people, my mind roams through endless th.. read more



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We all prolly feel this lol. I loved the Image of this crystal wall, I can feel Nerve patterns squirming in it. My only gripe as I read it was the re-use of the word "first" in the second line, but this was a neat Image and a good poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hogan

6 Years Ago

I am not at heart a serious writer of poems, when I do the process is very fast, a flow of thoughts .. read more
nicely written..some of the best are unknown

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hogan

6 Years Ago

picked this one because it has the element of neglect in it!
dunnia

6 Years Ago

hehe as if you now me well
hogan

6 Years Ago

just based on your work and your comments
bloody frustrating sometimes, at that! a solid and unpretentious write which draws its own merit by way of content and expression. nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Well written. Creative minds see the effect of sunlight -thus creates a moods in nature and a few from the imagination. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hogan

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. The effects of light can be very thought invoking
Enchantment

6 Years Ago

Look forward to read mor of your poems
hogan

6 Years Ago

Try fantasy or like and death, if you wish, I am mainly a writer of prose, but enjoy expressing basi.. read more
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Pax
do you know the mind is a creepy thing to play with... but it's also a place for something far more vast and beautiful... I love to swim in my thoughts... yet it's tiring of the endless negativity... but then agian i follow the light... this is really facinating write...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hogan

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your encouraging words, I am one of the lucky people, my mind roams through endless th.. read more
I really liked it, I thought the vibrant and ambient well described imagery set up great metaphors for the overall meaning of the poem. Also you have a very good vocabulary and quite some linguistic skill.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hogan

6 Years Ago

thanks, nice to hear comments like yours as I have not written any poetry for 30 + years.
In my own mind I see the castle, and those beyond it's limits, shamed and unknown. Even from outside they can see beauty, but cannot enter into that world, cannot truly admire and be admired.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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hogan

6 Years Ago

Tell me what you think of Fantasy, a raw poem written on here, not yours!
Love it

Posted 6 Years Ago


This twinkles beautifully! I love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


hogan

6 Years Ago

At least one person was there to catch a tiny rivulet of iridescence! Thanks
That_Girl

6 Years Ago

:D Welcome!

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Added on October 19, 2012
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blackpool, United Kingdom



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