My Way Out

My Way Out

A Poem by Not here

Please call my only doctor
and somebody call the nurse.
Message my taxi driver
and his ever loyal hearse.
Please call my momma.
And maybe call my dad.
Tell them that I love them;
convince them that I'm not bad.
'Cause I'm on my way out.

It took a while to see,
see, 
I'm been on my own.
Free.
Livin' life like my
king.
Not worried about a
thing.
Now you think I'm fine,
aye?
Livin' my life my
way.
Only problem is
I
would rather give up and
die.
Now without a single
doubt
I'm moving on my way
out.

Please call my only doctor
and somebody call the nurse.
Message my taxi driver
and his ever loyal hearse.
Please call my momma.
And maybe call my dad.
Tell them that I love them;
convince them that I'm not bad.
'Cause I'm on my way out.

What do you
say?
Why don't we spend a 
day
doing what we
like.
It's like learning to ride a
bike. 
Try, try and
fall.
Learn to make the 
call.
For once in your life pretend you're not on the
floor.
Take another step and open up the scary
door.
Close it behind you.
My door's another route.
Back behind the counter, where the men all sit and pout.
'Cause I'm on my way out.

Expected another chorus, did ya?
Used to my repetitive patterns? Tricked ya.
Does that rhyme?
Does that chime?
I don't care at all because it's my time.
No more time to waste, I'm hopping on my own
bandwagon as we go round and round. My tone
has changed over the past few months, as you know.
I don't know where it will stop or the places it will go.
But I write faster every time, leaving patterns behind. 
Making my own path down a road. These chains, they bind
my ankles so tightly and sometimes it's hard to walk.
Even harder to talk.
All they do is balk.
Now we're all alone, 
right?
Nights are shining so
bright.
Our phones are shiny
twilight.
We're heading for the 
last flight.
Faster, faster, closer, louder.
Thin and flaky, lost like powder.
That's the description of our fame.
The one we earn from a stupid game.
The one we earn by a stupid name.
The one we'll give our lives to tame!
But I'm sick of this mess.
I'm sick of social doubt.
I'm sick of inequalities,
and learning to live without.
So take this message, keep it.
I'm on my way out.

Please call my only doctor
and somebody call the nurse.
Message my taxi driver
and his ever loyal hearse.
Please call my momma.
And maybe call my dad.
Tell them that I love them;
please convince them I'm not bad.
'Cause I'm on my way out.
Take my life!
Take my life!
Take my days!
Destroy my strife!

Take my head!
Take my bed!
Take the demons
inside my head!
GET OUT!

Oh. Oh.
I'm on the way out.
At last.
I'm on the way

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david, This piece is simply f*****g GREAT. It reads like an anthem, a declaration to the world that who you are is how you'll stay...till the WAY OUT beckons and begs to be led. Your rhyming and rhythm/beat stays steady and stormy; the use of CAPITALIZATION and different size fonts can tend to be overused at times but you use them in a great way, for emphasis and impact RIGHT ON TIME!
You know, david, that I don't usually read stuff this long, but this piece drew me in and held me close...focus sharpened and stylized. Quite possibly your best write, IMO. This gets saved in my library favorites. And I think I'll send this out to others who's writing and judgement I wholly respect (if I can figure out how that's done). Congrats on this killer write! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you very much dan :) i really appreciate it and that'd be very nice of you.



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dan
david, This piece is simply f*****g GREAT. It reads like an anthem, a declaration to the world that who you are is how you'll stay...till the WAY OUT beckons and begs to be led. Your rhyming and rhythm/beat stays steady and stormy; the use of CAPITALIZATION and different size fonts can tend to be overused at times but you use them in a great way, for emphasis and impact RIGHT ON TIME!
You know, david, that I don't usually read stuff this long, but this piece drew me in and held me close...focus sharpened and stylized. Quite possibly your best write, IMO. This gets saved in my library favorites. And I think I'll send this out to others who's writing and judgement I wholly respect (if I can figure out how that's done). Congrats on this killer write! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you very much dan :) i really appreciate it and that'd be very nice of you.
haha. You make me smile with your crazy rhymes Dante. Stay positive my friend. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Stan Lee

8 Years Ago

Happy meal
Not here

8 Years Ago

that should be your username hahahahahaha
Stan Lee

8 Years Ago

Happy meal is my middle name. :D lol. jk
I really like your formatting of this piece, especially the emphasis on some of these words via large text and Capitalization!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you very much dalton :) i appreciate your review. glad you enjoyed it.
Strange poem, I like the composition with all sort of letters. It's a scream to be heared in some places. Well done, Dante. :) Rudi

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you very much :)

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