Funeral of a Wedding

Funeral of a Wedding

A Poem by Not here

I think I might just fall in love tonight (tonight)
I'm really not sure if I think it's right (tonight)
But even so I'll fall in love tonight (tonight)
Even so I'll fall in love tonight. (Right?)

I'm trying not to let it show,
'cause I don't want you to know.
I think this feels somewhat right,
but I'm not really sure tonight.
I'm trying not to let you in
'cause I don't want to begin
to imagine what if it went wrong.
Could we still sing our song?

I think I went and fell in love tonight (tonight)
I'm really not sure if I think it's right (tonight)
But even so I fell in love tonight (tonight)
Even so I fell in love tonight. (Right?)

I'm trying not to make a choice
'cause I'm scared of my cracking voice.
What if you think I'm not right?
What if you leave me tonight?
I'm trying not to let my head
take back everything I said.
I really want to love you more.
What about all the things we swore?

I'm sorry if you're not in love tonight (tonight)
I'm really not sure who of us is right (tonight)
But even if we fell in love tonight (tonight)
will you promise me to love me right? (for life)

Did we really fall in love that night? (tonight)
I'm really not sure if we got it right (tonight)
But promise me that you will hold me tight (tonight)
and I will promise to be yours tonight (tonight)

I'm thinking that I've made my choice.
Take all of me and take my voice.
Make me remember what we said.
Kiss me and get into my head.
I'm starting to forget my name.
I'm starting to feel so much shame.
Thinking that I've got insane.
Thinking that I'll drown in rain.

Tell me if we fell in love last night (tonight)
Tell me that we both are right tonight (tonight)
I don't really need to be more right (tonight)
So hold me.

© 2016 Not here


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this was beautiful and honest and just well it made me cry. it was great, Dante xo FLB

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I like the honest tone and good journey in your words.
"I'm thinking that I've made my choice.
Take all of me and take my voice.
Make me remember what we said.
Kiss me and get into my head."
I liked the above lines. Create place and thoughts for the reader to ponder. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

thank you coyote :) i really appreciate it
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Marvelous!!
I loved the structure and rhymes-
and the way u showed emphasis in the stanzas!
keep it up ❣
~Amy

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thanks :) i sure will amy
Amy R

8 Years Ago

ur welcome !
Love the rhyme in this poem! Great Work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you again :)
Good use of repetition here with your unique structure--I admire the way you put this down with the stanzas and the breaks.



Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you very much Josie :)
Josie E. Cook M. A.

8 Years Ago

You are wekome!
A good write reminded me of tonight tonight tonight by genesis my fav band, and read really well

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thats great :) i actually havent heard that song. ill give it a listen
I liked the structure of the poem which is quite unique. Also the words you wrote in brackets at the end of the lines really added to the tone and read. The ending was written in a simple manner which actually gave that ending more power.
Liked to read this :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you very much :) I appreciate it. glad you enjoyed i
Not here

8 Years Ago

i meant it*
It's indeed reading like a song. Beautiful love theme, Dante. :) Rudi

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you Rudi :) I appreciate it
More of a Lyrical piece by structure. Sometimes we don't know. we just close our eyes and Leap!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you jaycee :) and I agree
I loved it!!
Very well written!
The title is very intriguing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thn u so much emily :)

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