The Proverb

Ask me a question.

Show me the star.

Give me a moment

to reach that far.

Show me some beauty,

show me the stars.

Pass me the puzzle,

then hide behinds bars.

I'll roll the dice.

You pull the strings.

Give me your life

and I'll teach you some things.

Make me a monster.

Or make me a man.

Mention the murder,

then show me the plan.

Smile with teardrops,

puddles of rain.

Show me your fingers,

some cuts through the brain.

Show me the puzzle.

Show me the key.

I wonder how lucky

someone can be.

Starting a war,

starting a peace.

Piece of a puzzle,

just please release.

Give me to silence.

Love me to death.

Show me the puzzle

picture of your breath.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think this all means ;) If you want to personal message me, I'll give you the meaning of this poem to me, but otherwise I keep things a secret. I'll gladly let you know if you personal message me.

Reviews

[Emily]

Loved this!
Great poem!
Keep it up!!

[Not here]

thanks Emily :) I appreciate it

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Life is a puzzle. Never reveal your cards until prompted.
Love your format and arrangement of words.
Nice work!

[Not here]

thank you Josie :) That's a very interesting take on the poem. I appreciate it!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words and thoughts. I liked each set of words.
"Make me a monster.
Or make me a man.
Mention the murder,
then show me the plan."
The above one is my favorite. You made the reader think and ponder. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Not here]

thank you coyote :) im glad you thought it was good

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Marissa Mars]

I really like this poem! The flow is awesome. Great job!

[Not here]

thanks Marissa :) I'm glad you enjoyed it

[Corbin Driver]

Great poem! Great job Dante!!

[Not here]

thank you corbin :)