Sarcasm

Sarcasm

A Poem by lookforthegreens

Recollect i'm someone you gave a damn about please!
Open your eyes just the tiniest wide and you'll see me on my knees.

i'm not praying i'm imploring that my existance exists.
i'm not crying i'm just watering my eyes a little bit.
i'm not breaking i'm just picking myself up as i fall,
and there's no way my mind is gone,
if it never was live at all.

© 2010 lookforthegreens


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This is excellent! A great portrayal of the need to be recognised!
Wonderful poem hon!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


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lookforthegreens
lookforthegreens

portsmouth, VA



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