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A Poem by lookforthegreens
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Lovers that lie.

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i love you boy

you know this to be true

i've watched hands move for hours in the waiting of love from you.
but i've been played
every hour of the day
i've wasted my last dying breath expecting you to say
i love you girl

you know this to be true

i've watched hands move for hours in the waiting of love from you.

 

 

© 2010 lookforthegreens


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I liked this! I found it to be somewhat funny in that you repeat the lines of "You know this to be true" but in reality, someone who lies, has failed to see what is true and is covering up for it.

Ash

Posted 14 Years Ago


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lookforthegreens
lookforthegreens

portsmouth, VA



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My name is desaree, I'm seventeen and I love to write. I have a hard time distinguishing a certain genre for myself, I'm not entirely sure what I write about. My feelings just flow and I write what I .. more..

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