How it all started

 I am anxiously waiting for the school year to start.All i can think about is what will happen?Will he actually talk to me?Or will he just chicken out?Sometimes i wish he wasn't so shy.But why? I mean i don't evan know the kid.Heck i just know that his name is marc and he plays football.So your probably wondering how i know about this marc kid right?Well let me tell you how it all started.

 

 

 The bell rang.I rushed out of class to meet my best friend Terra. The first thing she said to me, when i walked up to her was "You won't beleive what happened!"

"What happened?" i said with a questioning glare. Partially scared ,do to the fact that she screamed her lungs out.

"Well i have this friend ,and well his name is marc."

"And?

"AND he saw a picture of you on my binder and thought you were pretty.He wants to meet you!"

"Who is this marc person?"

"He's only one of the hottest guys in my class!He's the varsity quarterback!"

"Woah really?Then he must be really good."

"No duh!"

THE BELL RINGS.

"Okay well we'll keep talking about this later i need to get to class.I don't want mrs. F having a sissy fit .Keep me posted."

"K! later mel!"

"See ya tomorrow terra!"

 

 

The next day i spotted Terra by the locker rooms.

"Hey Terra!"

"Hi mel!"

"So uhhhh?"

"So what?"

"Anything new with that marc kid?"

"Oh yeah he kept asking me random questions about you."

"Really, like what?"

"What yor favorite color is.How tall you are ,things like that."

"Oh okay"

"So how was class yesterday?"

"It sucked!"

"Really why?"

"Mr.F marked me tardy!The school called my parents and they got mad.""

"Oh that does suck""

 

The bell

 

"Okay well tell me what marc says during lunch k?"

"K!LAter!""

"Bye"

 

Second period was horrible.The teacher made us take a test that consisted of about four essays.Talk about harsh.

Third was evan worse.The Bio tacher screamed at the class for being noisy.No surprise there!

Fourth period was okay.It was the usual .

Fifth was enjoyable do to the fact that i knew everything we were learning.

Now time for lunch.I wonder whats new with that one marc kid.I'll find out soon.I was the first one there.The table was empty.I saw Terra coming from the stairs excited and hyper as always.

I had my back toward the Jock table (as i call it).

"Hey Mel!"

"Hey,anything new today?"

"Nope. nothing much and you?"

"Same -o- same -o-."

val  joined us

"Hey guys!"

"Hey Val !" We screamed in unison.

We just sat there for a while .Then Terra stood up.

"Okay Mel  i want you to turn around when i tell you to."

"Why?" I asked questioning.

"Just do it."

"No" val screamed

"Eh?"

"That Marc kid is sitting in the table behind you.If you turn around he's going to see you."

I had told Val everything.So she knew what was going on.Thank goodness i did.

"Man Val !Why do you have to kill everything?He wanted to see who she was."

"Well sooooorry!"

"Ha now i'm never going to turn around" i shouted

"Oh come on Mel don't be mad!He's the one that wanted to see who you were."

"Okay fine."

"Okay fine what?"

"OKAY FINE I'LL TURN AROUND!"

"Okay ,don't have to get all touchy about it."

"Well a little explanation wouldn't have hurt!"

"Sorry."

I turned around and pretended to talk to Val.

I looked up and there he was.

Tall dark and handsome.

I sat back down flushed.

So that was that.He knew who i was .

 The bell rang

"See you guys tomorrow!"

i screamed as i ran down the stairs

 

The rest of the day went by fast.

I went home and did the usual.

I lay in bed thinking of what lay ahead.

 

I Met Terra in the usaul spot in the morning by the locker rooms the next day.

"So did Marc say anything?"

"He said he was going to say hi to you."

"Really ?"

"Yeah."

"Okay"

Not the answer i expected but good enough.

So Terra told me about class after that.She went on about all the drama in her life .BLAH BLAH BLAH

Long story short.She was mad at some girl.

 

 

The day dragged on

I passed Marc after fourth period and he didn't say a word.That worried me.I don't know why though.Was a falling for him without evan knowing him?I hope not.

Wish i knew what was running through his mind.

I meen don't we all wish we could hear every guys thoughts.

I know i do.

It would make everything a hell of a lot easier!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That day was a normal school day nothing exciting happened.

Now the next day is a different story.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

let me know how i can make it bettter

Reviews

[Alex Thomas]

You describe them as "screaming" to each other too much. That's a little bizarre. You also have a few spelling mistakes but that's not really important. You should just worry about writing your story and definitely include more detail

[inhale]

You should add more, it's a great start. I agree with adding more details, bits of scenery and more details to settings and characters. Decribe their faces as they're saying something. anything so the reader gets a better feel for the characters personalities. But it still is very intersting.

[Jules]

I really like this. I thought the dialogue was really realistic, and I could actually imagine it happening. I think your plot is good as well. The one thing I would say, you need something other than dialogue. Well, you did have some things other than dialogue, but it wasn't enough to carry the plot. Add some descriptions or the characters thoughts, or what the characters see and hear. Good work!