Little Dreamer

'smie'

Its ok now
I didn't really go that far
So as to fool myself again
I was just looking at the star
I never really knew you'd known
Would it matter anyway
Each day i rise to the occasion
I'm lost for what to say

I'm just a little dreamer
Stuck in my reality
Where what I feel will mean so much
When I know Its You and me

For each day that I carry on
And feel all this You've gifted me
And I'll love You despite myself
And knowing this will set me free
I'll walk through my world now
Still learning to be the better man
So when sunset dawns upon my soul
I'll know I did all I can

And I'll have a smile for you
As I strive to realize Your dream
And I'll share my world with you
As love will set us free
I long to share my every touch
As a kiss would touch your soul
And I'm back in my world again
Knowing its you that made me whole

And I'll know in my heart of hearts
For our love will be nothing but true
And I stand again because I know
It is only realized by my walk with You

For to know and feel the love to be
To forever only be by Your side
I'll stand to find my way close to you
For I'm nothing without my bride
So little I can offer you
Yet so much in the love that I feel
And so I continue to walk upon my world
Until my dream is real
I stand just to do it, all again
Even when I can't take no more
And though at times I feel a little empty
Our love will be forever more
It's ok now
Can I be your dream come true?
For as I walk this world in my dream alone
I already know, It's You.
Don C
7.26.08

Reviews

[Ethan Leon]

I like it.......but it's more like a song, rather than a poem. Put it in a lyrical form, then try it again.