Daydreams of the Lover

Strings of light

Surrounded us in the middle

Of a secret forest

And I did not know

Whether they were yellow

Or if they were gold

I was not sure

How we had gotten there;

If you'd led me by the wrist

The only thing I knew

In all certainty

Was your tender hold

And the ineffable bliss

Of your kiss(es).

Reviews

[Horizons]

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[AlexValkyrie]

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[devon]

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