A 10 Word Poem #1

She felt his kiss like liquid

gold in her veins.

Reviews

[David Scott]

You did a good job being descriptive and vague at the same time.
Liquid gold can be so many things... Like a kiss.
I see richness, love, wealth, but also death, materialism, fools gold, burning desire and more...
You leveraged the power of your words well.

[devon]

Thank you for reading and leaving such a great review!