The Gift Of Life

 

I can hear the sound

Of Mother Nature’s heartbeat

Inside my own chest.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A good heart had the sound of nature. Mean old heart is strong and alive. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[jeannemarie coulter]

it is and the lucky do...fine haiku well pennes

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again.

[Beccy]

And such a precious gift it is; we should never waste a moment.

Love how this blends us and Mother Nature together; it's where we should always be, at one with this beautiful planet.

Beccy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for your review and insight. We should appreciate her everyday.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is so beautiful. And true. Wonderful.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks you, thank you and than you :)

[Rita L. Sev]

And a beautiful rhythm she plays in you, Dale. Very nice!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly Rita

[~]

I was thinking- what is that sound like? Is it like the whisper of the blooming daffodils? Or like the thunderous flight of an eagle? All creation being beheld within our sight. A crafty write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Some interesting questions… thank you.

[Dhaye]

This is well-written in 14 syllables. Haiku's and Senryu's are really powerful poems and enjoyable to read.
We are part of this world, so we are connected to nature. That's the gift of life.
Nice!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks you hon, actually it is 17 syllables, and yes they are powerful and challenging to create.

[Dhaye]

Oh yes, 17. Silly me. 5-7-5. lol

[Jamestown]

Very nicely done! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly.

[Marie]

Great senyru. Our inner selves vibrate to the universe.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Marie.

[DIVYA]

We need not always seek the beauty of Nature outside when so much of its magnificence lies within. Just loving this write Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So very true, and you should know cause your inner beauty is breathtaking.

[DIVYA]

When you say something so nice, I feel so good that I think I need nothing more in the world to live on :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

WOW, you really made me smile when I read that. It means the world to me you feel that way cause I deeply care bout you.