I Think Cupid Needs Glasses

I Think Cupid Needs Glasses

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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just something fun for Valentine's Day

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What’s the deal with cupid?

Don’t get me wrong

He does some wonderful work

But sometimes I think

It’s time for glasses.

Shooting arrows

That hit the wrong mark,

I mean what is he?

A major league umpire.

Or maybe sometimes

He has one to many drinks,

That can happen

When you have

So much responsibility.

Maybe that baby with wings

Needs to take lessons

From Johnny Appleseed.

Or maybe he is just anxious

To spread some much love

To a world needing it.

What ever the case may be

Cupid sure has many stray arrows

That has caused a lot of pain

Which the world doesn’t need.

So little buddy boy

Let’s get that aim tried and true

So you can stop putting

People’s eye’s out

And making love blind.

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Oh, a great take on the big mistakes we make in love!! I have sure had my share of them!!! smiles
Cute, Dale....really cute, and TRUTHFUL!! Cupid needs to have his glasses changed, or zap off the rose color tinting.
Something sure does interfere with his good judgment at times...maybe, he's had too much Valentine's Day candy, and has the wings weighted down.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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This is cute, Dale. Brought a little smile to the lips. Yep, cupid can be stupid! HA!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is such a cute write, enjoyed this

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Cute! I'll take him with me to my eye doctor today. :P Hope he listens. :P

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love it, Lighthearted and humour but true!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It's time for glasses.

Shooting arrows

That hit the wrong mark,

I mean what is he?

A major league umpire


Lol ~ Dale this is such a cute valentine day piece for today~
so funny and witty ~ I think maybe he really does need glasses
and also needs to hone his shooting skills for precision shots,
ole Cupid is off his mark quite a lot these days~ great WritE!

Fran


Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh, a great take on the big mistakes we make in love!! I have sure had my share of them!!! smiles
Cute, Dale....really cute, and TRUTHFUL!! Cupid needs to have his glasses changed, or zap off the rose color tinting.
Something sure does interfere with his good judgment at times...maybe, he's had too much Valentine's Day candy, and has the wings weighted down.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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