Heartache

Heartache

A Poem by Lil Miss Poe
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I made it for a broken hearted friend

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She loved him all she could

He walked away after he said

Those words that broke her heart

In little shards one shard was

Stuck and as her pain grew

It broke the skin her blood begin to 

Seep thru she laughed a hallow empty

 Laugh as her blood hit the floor for she

Knew her only chance at happiness was

Through because of him after all

She gave all her love and affection

And all she got in return was rejection

And so as the rest of her blood was spilt

The only thing she had to say was

“He didn’t even bother to say goodbye.”

At her funeral they had a closed casket

For she was so mutilated he was there

When the coffin was open at first

He saw what she had done to herself

His name craved into her arms

Over and over all the pain he had

Caused her all she wanted was for him

To say the words to her as she had done to her

Those three simple words

“I love you…”

© 2011 Lil Miss Poe


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Hey, I love your poem. You give a lot of description into this. I admire how you keep the point sharp and right till the ending. Great work. :)

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