What lies beneath...

take a delve..

The earth outmost is dressed in moss and frost,

The knitting is done sparking neat,

So that the fittest of the fit can't explore ,

What lies beneath.

 

The vaporising oceans spray their pith,

What goes in can never be seen,

For the perl itself admits its sin,

That it never knows  what lies beneath.

 

T he cloudes in the sky shields its miseries,

Spraying to remove the myth,

But who knows the extent of it?

because the moon dosen't no what lies beneath.

 

Like the sun,moon,sky &sea,

Let me see asoul who can see,

Through the iron walls of my heart,

And remove the sheath,

To tell me if it can see

What lies beneath...

Reviews

[Jwakefield]

Very nice, a lot to this. I really enjoyed it.

[Michael G. Smith]

You have made us question the mysteries of the ocean, the unknown in its vast fathoms. What lies there in places man cannot explore. You have told us even celestial bodies question what is beneath.

[Queen of Words]

this poem is symbolic to the denizens of a present past or future...river earth or sky...who know only whats visible to them..simillary a man only knows t waves of his inner self..fathoms are left untouched