At a distance!

A  craving for an old flame

T  he desire of a once demanding heart

 

A  distant memory

 

D  evotion of two hearts joined as one

I  recollect and reflect on the promises we made

S  o in love were we

T  he opaque light of the moon

A  nd the stars in the sky shone so bright

N  o one else mattered just you and I

C  arefree was that lovely night long ago

E  cstasy at a distance leaves me in a lover's trance

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

E cstacy at a distance leaves me in a lover's trance

I love this line! Very nicely written and a good job! Congratulations!

Oh, and Ecstasy - well, I hate to be the one to tell y'all this including you, Legion, but it's spelled like this! haha

[Rain]

I'm starting to get the flow of this genre. It takes some getting use to, but this was a beautiful piece. Rain..

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It's always refreshing to read writing such as this. Thank you for sharing.

[Jessi]

wow this is beautiful. I love how you wrote it!!

[Antony]

Beautiful thoughts and memories will sometimes make us pause for awhile, this is how I read this p;oem, it is dreamy and has a purity to it. Nice work, glad to back reading your work again.
Antony

[Arthur Henn]

Very Nice...He is a lucky man. A great poem for one you love or loved.

Art

[Legion]

Nice acrostic.

"E ctacy " - ecstacy