Passionate Love

p assionately in love

a doring in every way

s ensitive and shy

s uch a sweet guy

i love you intimately

o nly you and I

n eeding one another

a ttentively so

t ogether as one

e vermore

 

l oving you

o ften is never enough

v ery much i love you with the passion of my desire

e ternally and blissfully i adore thee my passionate love

Reviews

[Teenage poet]

This makes me think of love in such a different way. I wish I had more of a romantic side. Especially like the one in this poem.

[Harlow Aaron]

Wow, this is a wonderful poem! Something that I feel at this exact moment in my life. Very passionate!!!

[Cordell]

OMG this is sooo great, I tried writing poems like this but they don't sound right, u made it flow so well W2G, keep it up peace & stay safe! :)

[PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..]

I loved this poem! Ah, the foundness of one's heart, it truly makes one feel so young again!
I loved your artstic ceativity on this great piece of work!
A very beautiful poem! Good luck in all your future work!
TIM

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

Great piece and I love the style. Nicely done.
Debby

[Ray Hamilton]

Feelings of the heart are always a joy to read
This is wonderful, a lucky guy to have someone love him like this
Thanks for sharing Ray { Not a Poet }

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

"o nly you I" did you mean Only you and I??

Anyway, this is a very good, sweet and romantic... Wow, i keep getting to read romantic things... This is very good, it flowed very well and had alot of emotions that sparkled off the page... Great Job!!