Can Someone Mend My Broken Heart?

Please don't drink and drive!

C an someone mend my broken heart

A fter my son was killed it was shattered into pieces

N ow I am left alone with tears in my eyes

 

S omeone come to my rescue

O h tell me it can't be true

M y precious child has been taken from my arms

E ven the angel's cry

O h tell me it can't be true

N ot him Lord up above please not him

E ven the angel's cry

 

M orning comes so suddenly

E ach day goes by I am sadder

N ot a moment do I not shed a tear

D amn I just wish he was here with me

 

M y heart is as heavy as it can be

Y ou see he meant the world to me

 

B obby was his nickname

R obert was such a beautiful human being

O h Lord take care of him for me

K eep him with a smile upon his face

E very now and then give him a hug

N ow and then let him know I miss him so

 

H ave mercy on me Lord

E very moment I survive another day without him here by my side

A mother's heart's been torn in two and I know not what to do

R each out Lord from the heaven's above

T ranscend your eternal love

Reviews

[Chaos]

God hears prayers and I'm sure, Bobby is being hugged and loved and especially rewarded for the altruistic gift of saving a life; sacrificing his own. You were chosen to bare the child that would save a life. If your child was not in this world at the time that little boy needed him, than he would have died and how do we know that child that he saved could be the one to find the cure for cancer? Your son lives within you and you are blessed to have known and cared for him. You will be rewarded for your strength.

Powerful piece.

[FRANK]

Now, this is a beautifully written poem! You depict your emotions very well here. I could imagine your grief in my heart - wishing all the while that it could have been prevented.

Wow! Your writing continues to amaze me so much...

Frank

[Brianna Brie]

Your loss is deeply felt in this poem, but so is your love. Glad that you are able to get the message out in a positive way, "Don't Drink and Drive". You are a courageous mother and talented writer.

[Fran Marie]

A sad, but great descriptive piece, penned and deeply expressed

in Acrostic form ~ THanks for sharing~Fran Marie

[Cece]

omg you you have torn my heart from my chest
as i review i feel my eyes gathering moisture
i have felt similar with the death of my nanay

i thought i would never survive
she was my dearest friend my caretaker
my shoulder to cry on my punisher when
i did wrong but most of all taught me love

now i have a lil brother of 3 i am his
caretaker his friend and i find i am
teaching him the same lessons of my nanay
if something was to happen to him
just rip my heart out and stomp on it

[Leo Gems]

To lose a child in such a way. My heart goes out to you. Your darling child is alive and within your heart. He hears you and loves you eternally.. through your ink.. we know your love for him as well. Find comfort to know that he is not in pain, but with you.. with every step you take. Find joy and smile.. because he would not want you to be sad.. he would want you to live your life.. enjoy your life.. he would not want yours to stand still or stop just because he was needed as angel above in the clouds.

Peace to you.. and thank you for sharing your heartfelt message.

[waywithwords]

My heart goes out to you my friend. A mothers child gone from this world is just the hardest to bear but God is good and your pain will ease over time even though your heart must feel broken you must live strong my friend for your lovely son. He would not want his mum to be in such a state. My daughter lost her her young child and that was hard for her too but then you must think of other ways to cellebrate his life that he had. I pray some of my words help you. Lovely poem and one you can treasure for always. Take good care. HUGSxxxxxxxxxxxxxAnne

[Gandré]

My dear, this is such an absolute loss. I understand your immessurable pain. Even it is so I would like to say that he is save now and it is you have to take care of, you think about him with your love with this love you always had for him and you keep him in your heart but release your pain- for it is not improving anything when you are suffering so deeply or getting ill, I instinktive believe that the way is looking into the blue sky where he is with you just in another state of consciousness and he wants you be happy again. Such a wonderful writing this was. Love you, hugs and thank you for Illicit Woman review. please try to smile. yrs lara.

[JadedSparrow]

I am sorry for the pain that you have endured and endure still. Losing someone close to us, especially a child is all but soul shattering. The anguish you have experienced is alive in this piece. Absoluetly extrordinary. While I regret that the inspiration came in such a manner, I did enjoy the poem. God Bless.

[Gema]

Oh this make me cry!
I feel for you so much!
Lovley free flowing heart ridden write full of truth full of power full of a mothers love!
I love this the way you talk of him to keep his memory alive!
I can't tell u how i no you feel because i've never had anyone die before but i know how you must feel!
Keep writing x