life

kinda hard to write here cause you cant save it for later and comeback to rewrite it so you have to post it before its ready.....btw this one isnt dont yet either lol

***ROUGH DRAFT

an existence bruised, broken, shattered,

a glimpse of my life

torn at the seams, battered.

 

puzzle pieces of this thing, my heart

ready and waiting

only to notice they fit apart

 

love seems to be the whisper of a dream

like sand in an hourglass to slip through my fingers,

a gift given only to tease

 

purpose seems a joke,

unsure where i fit, if at all.

every breathe i take, my lungs only choke

 

my savior to steal me away from this misery

are you too late for me?

in this dark well, the light only waning -

dont let me pull you into this hell with me.

 

 

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

Very deep!!

Loved it

Orlando M