Your Loneliness

Your Loneliness

A Poem by TheGrimm_Sleeper
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Does your loneliness take on the same form as mine?

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Does your loneliness take on the same form as mine?


Does your loneliness creep in your window on a frigid November night, ascending down the windowsill and blackened walls? Does your loneliness tiptoe to the end of your bed and leer over your sleepy body as you replay the past.

Does your loneliness write it’s way into your dreams casting menacing shadows of a ghostly love that you once had? Only to startle you awake because you feel “their” presence lying next to you? Tell me does your loneliness take on the same form as mine?

I can’t be alone in even feeling this lonely.

© 2017 TheGrimm_Sleeper


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TheGrimm_Sleeper
Please ignore grammatical errors and please share feedback but nicely. No need to be mean.

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You think you feel lonely? Look down to your shadow, and let me know what she feels, some of us forget we have a shade of our lives, we think no one wants us, but who wants her? Your shadow? Im talking about you, see theres a special thing in the shadow, it is you who really has to pay atention, and you will find yourself. You cant be lonely when you have yourself

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Added on April 4, 2017
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TheGrimm_Sleeper

Orlando, FL



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