No time

We're all there or soon will be

Haven't got the time
To lose what's left of my mind
Gotta go to work
for the bill collector lurks
With the debts I left behind

Author's Note

Another phone quickie. Despite the fact there's a computer right in front of me

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

I do have time ;)
Thank for such a small and very expressive poem.

love it!
Singh :)
- Cheers!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks singh. It's good to hear from you

[Vikrantsingh]

Same here :)

[Tom]

Better out than in I say !

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol! Thank you tom

[Art]

does anyone have time? nice work BR

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you art

[Raya]

The slogan for America should be debt, debt, debt, and more debt. Nice.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you raya

[Eddie Phillips]

It was quick but very truthful!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Eddie

[unsavable_soul]

Nice,
swift and to the point. We all have a debt, do we pay it is the final question, could easily be taken metaphoric. Well played.
Chris
95/100 - I know you can do much better.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you soul

[Angi]

Man, ain't it the truth, Baby... Angi~

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure. Thank you Angi

[N!LoC]

giggle giggle giggle......

[Baby Ricochet]

Good to see you N!LoC

[Inda]

Another smile provocking piece!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you inda

[Tate Morgan]

The bill collector is always round the corner They smile when they sell it to you and grimace when they take back their pound of flaesh

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure. Thanks for stopping by Tate.