The Crow On The Pole Haiku

More phone fun

The crow on the pole
Cawed at me as if to mock
So I shot his a*s

Reviews

[DIVYA]

You did good Baby. And in the process we got a good laugh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Divya

[Daniel Sala]

Ha, ha, ha. Good poem! Fun to read, unexpected ending.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Daniel

[Draven]

I can't help but smile at this short poem that is somehow full of meaning in the most interesting of ways.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Casanova3

[Tai Ryens]

Crows are often associated with superstitions that involve death, and to shoot it means to shoot death . . . the irony!

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol! Thanks tai

[m.s.early]

Bang! Delightfully cruel and vulgar with a hint of class barely exposed. Funny as hell. Perfect score in my book!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks for stopping by Xavier. i appreciate it

[Cassie]

hahahahaha....looks like you have so much fun on phone, its shows clearly on this write.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you cassie

[Inda]

Love it!! Another example of Ricochet at his best!

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you inda

[Joyce S. Greene]

A very non-traditional haiku, BR, but what the heck? Crows are part of nature and you are, too, so if you want to shoot one and write about it, might as well do it in very short form poem. Once he's dead, it's over and done with and why prolong the agony? lol

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you joyce

[Marie]

Served him right. THough I don't know why he needed an a*s. Crows fly; they don't ride on donkeys.

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol! Thank you Marie

[Mark]

Crows are hard to kill. At least after the first one. They are pretty smart.

[Baby Ricochet]

A twelve gauge will do the job

[Mark]

LOL true if you're close enough. I used to target practice at the dump with a .22 as a kid. Only ever killed one crow, after that they never let me get a clear shot.