Thunder Missile

 

Thunder Missile

 

Needle-gain

Needle-spike

With this arm

I shall strike

Needle-throat

Needle-pierce

I laugh but you,

Too, know how fierce

Needle-enter

Needle-blood

Drip to the floor

And watch it flood

Needle-corrupt

Needle-kill

The room

Watches soul fill

Needle-shiver

Needle-lay

I watch, I listen

Then enter the fray

Reviews

[Mike L. Smyth]

hmmm....i like this because i have never seen anything like it. I like how you go in order of what the actual event would be like....not to mention you hate needles...i feel you brotha. great job :)

[Gabriela Rivas]

Good rhyme scheme and good subject.


It's funny how the needle kills... I thought you hated needles.