I'm Alright

I'm Alright

A Poem by Andrew

You find the best moments in life hidden in the most unexpected places.


I'm alright.

I started my day

With no worries,

No strife.

The featherlike clouds

Float along in the breeze.

While cardinals serenade me

High in the trees.

The river runs deep

Through the forest it flees.

As I sit back and relax

Using time as I please.

I'm going to dance

Because I can

Rest, work, and play

All over this land

It may sound like I'm leaving

But I'm really just breathing

Thankful to be receiving

Each day by His hand.

© 2010 Andrew

Author's Note

Second of three poems written in West Virginia

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A simple straightforward song of gratitude. Very free, and very freeing! A lovely clutch of thoughts. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I really love this poem. I felt so care free and at ease when reaing it. You captured great imagery! Thank you for writting this and sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice carefree muse. Reflecting on our blessings...

Posted 12 Years Ago

hmm... very reflective... sensual!
i like... sort of insightful!

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is truly beautiful and ever so amazing as well as very inspiring! You have a wonderful gift.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 20, 2010
Last Updated on March 22, 2010
Tags: happiness, joy, fun, dancing, God, religious, nature, river, trees