Paradise Found

Sitting here,I see the sunset,
the beautiful winter sunset,
red rays,red sky,red sun and her eyes.
The big dreamy eyes,the greyish eyes,the mysterious eyes.
She looks out of the window, her expression angelic.
Her soft smile,the arched brows,the small face,
thin lips, and the waves in her hair.
Each feature exquisite and elevated by the warm winter sun outside.
She walks as if gliding,but those eyes, Oh those romantic eyes
that spoke a million words in just a second.
Eyes that could freeze a smouldering coal,
Eyes which when looked into mine,opened up a thousand secrets.
When she looked at me, my heart made no sound,
my feet lost ground,till it dawned on me that at last,
I had paradise found.

Reviews

[horizon]

Beautifully described a girl...very sensitive and touching piece wrote with a lot of emotion and love

[Surya pradha]

could picture your 'paradise'. beautiful descriptions, nice work!

[dhruv]

Thanks man :)

[Duckey]

Beautiful poem, i love it! It has such wonderful language, and the way it flows is very nicely done! Loved it!

[dhruv]

Glad you liked it...