Richardo

Richardo

A Poem by Lechuza
"

The things you dream when you're tired, really tired.

"

Girly guy on the left has left his hat

And his coat colour black looks really fat.

I ask him for help 'cause I'm feeling high.

He cannot see through his eyes the moonlight;

Smoked purple hash that grows under rain.

He feels little pain, Richardo's insane.

His skinny body has two little breasts

Which are quite used for sex. We need to rest.

Richardo's hat fell inside the green floor,

The long hair in his head has no odor,

But I know that his blond hairs may kiss mine

Because I smoked and he is drunk with wine.

   Vice in his bed and being bad as hell

   In a 90's dream where he may have dwelt.

© 2012 Lechuza


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Oh, well thanks! I changed the word.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Jesus, 90's, 90's all over the place weeeeee.
However I reccomend you to stick to either American or British spelling and not mix both, apart from that is gorgeous.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved it! It's very very you. =D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Babe, but you can correct the mistake if you want. Go to 'Manage Writing' and click the little thing where you can edit this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There's a horrible mistake in line 9, it should say "Richardo's HAT fell inside the green floor" Sorry, my bad :/

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 14, 2012
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Lechuza
Lechuza

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Once Percy Bysshe Shelley said he was a mankind lover. Well, dear Shelley: I'm afraid to tell you I'm also a mankind lover. Tall and big brown eyes. The smell of whiskey and cigarettes. Guitars, men.. more..

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