Future in the Past

Future in the Past

A Poem by The Analog Kid
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As usual, music is my inspiration. I don't believe in hiding where I get my ideas. I think displaying them enhances the writing. I was challenged by a writer friend to do a trippy poem:)

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The soul dance

some eastern trance

a funkadelic

honky tonk

sitar

snake charmer

 

camp fire girls

drift across the sky

mind spinning

completes that circle

in orgasmic delight

 

yes

some other night

melts in a flux

of the future

and my past

 

stepping through time

an ascension

in my mind

 

harmonics

resonate

and ruminate

in that marinade

that never resolves

itself

 

the endless cadenza

of a spirit

that’s

mine all mine

© 2012 The Analog Kid


Author's Note

The Analog Kid
This is a supergroup: Joe Satriani, Sammy Hagar and Michael Anthony (formerly of Van Halen), and Chad Smith (current drummer of the Chili Peppers).


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Man, this WAS trippy! To a wonderfully cool effect I might add! And I love the video...very awesome. Joe is my favorite guitar player. Those sparkling ember campfire girls dancing like gypsies across the sky might be "Aurora and her sister Boring Alice"...sorry, I stole that from Jimmy Buffett...lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I like the syncopated rhythm in duple time in this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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The Analog Kid

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. I am glad you caught on to that feel:) It's been a long time since I was on here grea.. read more
icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

Nice to see you back and it was really good to read you!
The Analog Kid

10 Years Ago

Thanks! I will have to stop bay and read you soon also!
A super group for sure.. loved hearing that song .. your poem is also pretty super.. i felt as if i were floating , many times i find inspiration in music . This writing to me is somewhat psychedelic , a fine stew .


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Analog Kid

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much! It is great to have a review from an old friend :)
Chloe..Across the Universe

10 Years Ago

Many welcomes ! It is great to read an old friends wandering mind :)
I love it and that last stanza nailed my smile.. I can feel your words..x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Analog Kid

11 Years Ago

Thanks Tracey:) This is one of my most spontaneous writes and I love the hell out of it!xoxo
†Tracey†

11 Years Ago

That's fun when it happens.. more true to the channeled feelings stirring about.. xo
The Analog Kid

11 Years Ago

Yes it is. I think the portal only open for a brief opportunity though...lol!
You were swimming in the groove on this one Pat, lots of creativity here with a great rhythm that flows. Nice video too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Analog Kid

11 Years Ago

This is the musician's choice poem...lol! Anyway, I wish I could get back to that groove again...h.. read more
Relic

11 Years Ago

I've been searching for it for a while Pat, :) you're welcome.
haha, nice poem it let your creative juices flow out, nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Analog Kid

11 Years Ago

Thanks:)
Makes me want to dust off the hookah, call in the belly dancers and midnight ladies.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cheez n rice waz up with this my brudda... that was some snazzy shite my friend... dug it down to the core, down to the floor, down on her wiggle till my lips were sore... lol

seriously, this was probably my fav of your's so far... very good man, very impressed!

:)


Posted 12 Years Ago


love it . . . just the right about of rhythm and blue

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose is right.....I have seen credenza a dozen times but never cadenza...lol. Nice walk through a surreal painting. You do a great job with music as your muse and Rose as the crew boss applying the whip when necessary. Loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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congratulations - you are the only poet to effectively use the word cadenza in the history of the world.

love this. well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 25, 2011
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Tags: trip, psychadelic, surreal, chickenfoot, sammy hagar

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The Analog Kid

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