Winter Haiku

Winter Haiku

A Poem by Dimitri

The sun sits still

On top of the leaves

My feet are cold

© 2010 Dimitri


Author's Note

Dimitri
Haiku is a genre of Japanese poetry consisting on 5,7,5 syllable poems, this translates to short line, long line, short line in english, I hope you enjoy it.
(to find out more about Haiku check http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku)

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This is a very well written write.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Wow, so I'm not the only person who loves to go out in the now with bare feet :) I love this one. Its was sweet and meaningful. I love reading your writing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is sooo good! i love how it made me feel like i was in snow without any shoes on! its very well written and its very good
Keep on!
-Anna Kay Patton

Posted 10 Years Ago


!!!!! I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY PERSON WHO RUNS AROUND OUTSIDE WITHOUT SHOES IN WINTER!!!!
jkjk, but I really do like it, its very blunt.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 12, 2010
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Dimitri
Dimitri

Guadalajara, JAlisco, Mexico



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I believe that writing is the art of telling complex things with simple words. Sadly, most writing today seems to be complex words telling simple things... Love to write, love to read, I believe th.. more..

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