Missing: You

Couldn't sleep one night and was really missing someone. Then these words started forming in my mind, and so I wrote them down and tweaked it a bit.

I miss your laugh,

I miss your scorn,
I miss your past which fate has drawn.

I miss your joy,

I miss your pain,

I miss your song that scatters rain.

I miss your smile,

I miss your tears,

I miss your days in present years.

I miss your silence,

I miss your noise,

I miss your emotions, behind decoys.

I miss your thoughts,

I miss your voice,

I miss your wisdom, knowledge, choice.

I miss your touch,

I miss your ear,

I miss knowing you are there.

In my life,

You know it's true,

There's something missing, and that is you.

Reviews

[ShaneBerry]

wow, a true love letter if i have ever read one, this would get any one back very good write David, im glad to have read it.

[Sunni Davis]

Deeply touching, slightly sad and very beautifully written.

[sarah]

i wish my ex would say this! beautiful poem!

[Acacia Avel]

This poem makes the part of my heart missing someone glisten. Beautiful.

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. oh, how beautifully you express yourself ... i miss a special someone too but could never write about it so well ...