Pain

Pain

My empty eyes bore into an invisible focus as I numbly lay

The objects abreast me sluggishly fading

Cheeks stinging from briny tears crossed with malevolent altercation

Why address me as grotesque than statuesque?

Is not each individual beautiful?

Your mind feverish above the cold heart

Mind over matter and mind over soul

Have you any mercy for me?

I can distinguish your shadow, gray and deep

It hovers over me and I pray

Please take the agony away

 

 

 

Reviews

[Stephen]

Love's pouring into the ink through your feelings of your red heart. The combination of emotions and love, I've founded into the piece...I mostly hate to see tears into beautiful ones's eyes but sometimes, I love cause I believe if they don't cry then how the demons can get an opportunity to kiss n drink those sweet tears which always immortal the souls. I adore this poem.

[RichGee]

Very heartfelt but great write...you really capture the essence of your message with such
Vivid imagery through your words....nice, very nice piece...

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Very heartfelt, I really feel a strong sense of emotion from this! Well written :)

[Aguilar]

I like how you wrote this you can really feel it great work

[Devesh]

You have the ability to capture pain and anguish in your writing like few do. I loved the line "Cheeks stinging from briny tears crossed with malevolent altercation", it captures the essence of this poem. Thanks for sharing your perspective, you always provide great insight with your poems. :)

[Erik Daniel]

I like this one! Good job!