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I want

A Poem by Ren Grace

I want


I see you in a way you could never see yourself


I wish my eyes were your morning mirrors


I wish my words were your thoughts


I wish my mind were your mind


I want to know every aching pain you’ve ever felt


I want to be familiar with every fault on your skin


I want to love all of you


But most of all, I want you to love you too. 

© 2014 Ren Grace


Author's Note

Ren Grace
I've been MIA for a while.
Please feel free to critique anything :) Thank you for reading.

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This is so lovely, my dear! And so wonderfully written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ren Grace

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :)
i love this little quaint piece

i love the last line!

keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ren Grace

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It means alot
A beautiful write Lauren. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ren Grace

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
I love the last line. I want you to love you too. Everyone should love who they are and if they don't like something, go ahead and change it. It's your life after all. Great write. (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ren Grace

11 Years Ago

Thank you! Everyone deserves someone to lift themselves through tough times. Everyone needs to love .. read more
Sweet and cute poem and loved the last line:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ren Grace

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)

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