UNTITLED

my feelings...

So many things do i wish to say
Yet i cant seem to find a way
My outsides look so cool
But deep within its so blue
I feel the pain in every part anew
That which was not the familiar one i knew
The burning sensation within my heart
Which feels like its been pierced with a dart
And all the uncertainty lingers in my thoughts
Leaving me to wonder in fraught
And as i lay down trying to find sanity in my state
I realize i have used myself as bait.....

Reviews

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A very honest piece of self reflection. Perhaps that could be it's title...."Self reflection".

Your words invoke feelings in the reader that we are all familiar with. Pain. Doubt. Loss of sense of self. You have expressed them nicely and with an innocent rhyme pattern.

A nice little poem. Keep writing.