the pier

the pier

A Story by soulesswriter
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a broken hear who ended up a bleading heart

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Rain pores on my dry skin

Memories flood my brain

Everyone was staring at me as I walk by

They wanted me to disappear and never come back

They push my buttons hoping I explode

I was a bomb but I did not tick

I was a timed explosive that did not explode

 I was a hollow abandoned mine shaft

Waiting for someone to touch it gently to collapse

My emotions have been manipulated so many times

I did not know what sadness or pain is

I looked too far to find happiness

I was blind to see you there

I tried to ignore you but you manage to stick out

You manage to care for me now I’m the one who needs attention

My life is turning into a big ball of emotion I never felt

I feel like a zombie who came to life

Your smile was the best thing and lit up my dull day 

No matter how dark it was

Your love is so warm it will melt an ice glazer in minutes

You are the best thing that happened to me

Rain pores on my dry skin

Memories flood my brain

I thought it was supposed to last forever

You made my life better just to remind me how bad it was

I knew what happiness was and Felt human for once

Half way down the pier you left me

Now I’m alone, dead, and hopeless

Its irony that you broke my heart on this pier

And now i am laying on the wet wood with two holes in my chest

to keep the lead from entering your body even though you left me

don't you thinks its irony that I have two holes in my heart

one you gave me and the another one I got from saving you

© 2014 soulesswriter


Author's Note

soulesswriter
can u guys plz tell me what u think and report to me my mistakes

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It's romantic! :3 Melikey…..

Posted 10 Years Ago


soulesswriter

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading it would u mind if I send you request ?
Bianca

10 Years Ago

:3 not at all
soulesswriter

10 Years Ago

Cool thanks :)
this is cute, but still holds the sense of melancholy, nice write.
-rain

Posted 10 Years Ago


soulesswriter

10 Years Ago

Thank you glad you liked it
falling_toxic_rain

10 Years Ago

no problem :)

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Added on October 25, 2013
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