Duck Dinner

A new nursery rhyme that popped into my head in the middle of the night.

Duck Dinner

 

Paddle, paddle,

Webbéd feet;

Dip your head for

Fish to eat.

Author's Note

Initial reactions and constructive criticism welcome. This is meant to resemble a traditional nursery rhyme.

Reviews

[Ghost]

Again another wonderful rhyme... I am really happy to read these... Thank you for sharing

[Debbie Barry]

Thanks, Ghost! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it. Writing scraps like these gives me joy. It's fun to express an idea in only a few words, at least sometimes.

[Neville]

Down down, deeper and down, take some air and do not drown....... Nice one Debbie........N

[Debbie Barry]

Thanks, Neville! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I rather like your snippet in response, too -- better than what I wrote!

[Neville]

my pleasure my friend.... Neville