You could pee on the seats

I started this life riding on a bus
I've walked to work, when I didn't have a truck
I've owned a truck and driven all over the land
I've had a sport car, but people who drive them I couldn't stand
Got real used to that, escalade experience, it was a dream.
My first car was a fiat, painted From a can that was green.
I've driven cars with three on the tree
I've owned cars out of its window you could pee

My cousins name was Linda Lou
She owned a push button, Chevy two

Eight . in my family, that's how I grew up
In back of station wagons my little sister upchucked
Didn't matter what was at the end if the drive,
please let me outta this thing., while I'm alive

Drove a white Bonneville, half a city block long
Mirror hanging off the side, stereo playing a song.
Had a 55 willys. That's a jeep, that I
Worked at the grocery store just to keep.
Climbed up the hills at the rock quarry at night
then tumbled down. them giving our girlfriends a fright.
Drove an Olds nighty eight, with plastic on the seats,
Laid rubber half a block, you could pee your pants on the seats
Now I drive a car made in Korea, you just never know in This life I guess, it's a kia.

Author's Note

A walk down " I can't remember lane'

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Lol, hey D , I'm drunk but I love the right shot I got to pee,
Hold up, now that I'm relieve, love the play on words,
Great story because there i s an game
But f!ow comes together with awesome ending

[Mauricio Montoya]

Typo sorry, Excellent write

[D. Mansfield]

Awesome, I'm glad your drunk. If mire people got drunk I would have people reading this s**t I write. Liquor is a good option. Any young impressionable people out there? Go get drunk and come back and read all this drivel I have written. Maybe make it into a tok tok thing, got drunk and read an old man's. . .I guess poetry???? Who you calling an old man? Nobody said anything about anold man. Hey, that's my car, get out of it NOW!!!!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

No I'm drunk but it is a good write it sober. Me to read. Thanks, lol

[Vol]

D.
Very much like everything that ever happens... start here and get to where you never planned to go. 59 Impala, red on white~~~~~ VW Beetle(s)..VW microbus... Pacer wagon... tons more... BMW 850 motorcycle...
Vol

[D. Mansfield]

I envy the vw microbus, if ever there were a "statement" vehicle that was it. Peace and love brother

[Vol]

And back atcha, sir! My 73 microbus had a Porche pancake engine in it...

[ETERNITY]

@Vol ...HI! Volcano! I had a '64 metallic blue Chevy Impala that drank as much transmission fluid as she did gas. But I loved her! I moved away and Mama sold her for 200...They never paid. Your life has so many things going on! We are just 2 ships that passed in the night. WTH? Probably might've loved each other to death. Sorry but I had to tell ya 'bout my 64. Smooches.

[D. Mansfield]

Please read carefully. I didn't pee on my seats.
That would be gross.
I was just painting a picture

[D. Mansfield]

Thank you for clarifying that for us. Are those your real ears? They seem BIG, do you hear OK? Ha ha ha

[Samuel Dickens]

We have walked... er, driven similar paths, it seems, although I kept most of the pee off of my cars seats. Thanks for the wild ride.

[D. Mansfield]

Thank you for reading and commenting

[Dessi]

Wow, D, seems like a pretty realistic walk through life, no holds barred.
"A walk down I can't remember lane" kind of made me sob a little in my chest. Idk, right?
Your communications relay is so good.
You give wonderful graphics.

[D. Mansfield]

Thank you very much.

[emmajoygreen]

Laughed aloud at the rhyming of the finale, brows rose throughout, learned about U.S.cars and what their ownership meant or not. Saw a few cvery clearly laid happenings, admired the length of your poem and its reflections' and its amusing over-spill!!!

'Now I drive a car made in Korea, you just never know in This life I guess, it's a kia' :)))

[D. Mansfield]

I enjoy making you laugh, as for rhyming I don't remember any rhyming patterns that ate traditional, I smoked weed all through high school English classes, and even if I'd have learned all of it. I would have forgotten it all by now.. everyday is new. It's like groundhog day the movie, I start fresh every morning

[emmajoygreen]

Should have responded by now.. forgive please but at least have enjoyed yet another laugh at that last line!