Raging Music

Raging Music

A Poem by D. Mansfield
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Sounds like a personal problem

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The raging music in your head
Plays silently. Like a book you've read.

All original, you wrote every note,
All so comfortable, like a favorite winter coat
Music so beautiful that no one can hear
Saving it for something special, madness you fear.

You have no musical talent no musical ability
You conduct a private orchestra to find tranquility,
The exquisite noise raging in your head, takes me home or  to wherever Im led.

© 2025 D. Mansfield


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Interesting concept and well rhymed, but I don't get the last line.

Posted 5 Days Ago


D. Mansfield

5 Days Ago

It makes no sense at all I agree, It wasn't a stretch.It was a great big leap

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