Deepest Sorrow

Its about a fight that I had with an important person in my life.

Engulfed in anger.
Im ticking like a bomb.
Soon I will implode.
Sound the alarm.
Fussing and cussing.
Time is almost up.
Explode.
I have just blown up.
Hatred in my heart towards another.
Looking in his eyes I see myself,
Its like we are twin brothers.
We clash like lightening.
Nobody strikes.
Tension so strong you couldn't cut it with a knife,
Maybe this time was so right.
I became a man starting then in my life.
Maybe the approach was wrong.
But letting go felt so right.
Now I feel I can start my life.
Because I showed that fight.
I love him caused he raised me.
But now I am on a different page you see.
One not of him or me.
But this chapter begins with me.

Author's Note

What do you think about this poem give true opinions. I will not be mad because I need to know my flaws so I can become great.