How far would you go

This is a poem asking your truth about how far you truly would go

How far would you go?

 

 

If someone called your girlfriend a ho

 

Would you punch'em in the face, or just say, so

Or would you say, what makes you say that? or that's really low

Underneath your skin, lies and lies grow

Lying is your savior, cause you could never say no

Drugs was the only way to go

 

Go and do something you want, cause inside your a shallow

Or cut yourself and watch your self bleed too slow

 

This is when you wanna pretend your face is grass and you mow

How far would you go?

Is the question I wanna know

Shoot yourself and hope you don't end up below

 

Fight to the death, end up on skids row

As the sun goes down, and the river starts to flow

Really, tell me, how far would you go?

Author's Note

Tell me, how far would you go?

Reviews

[Seeker]

I like the rhyming pattern. Both techniques of rhyming and rhythm are excellently used in this poem. Were you angry when you wrote this? Because I can really feel the energy, the heat and the fierceness of the question. How far would I go...as you said in your poem, I really would say "what makes you say that?" but then after some thought, I think would say no. This poem provoked all sorts of thoughts, beyond the question that started it all, which makes it very excellent. Write on!

[Sydney]

so i was looking at the side and if im right, it says: i would go this far. creative. i like it.

[Dominic Rosales]

Thanks you guys, I wasn't angry when I wrote this, I just have a lot going on in my house, my poem welcome to my world describes some of the problems in my house, but other wise, I just was boreed at 1:30 in the morning and wrote this.

[lindsay]

Awesome! I loved how every lined rhymed, good job! I pretty much loved every line, because they all flowed nicely together. Thought provoking question and poem....Good Job!