lost

lost

A Poem by Bianca La Salle

i feel like everything i do is wrong
everyone just annoys people
no matter how hard i try to make it right
it just crashes on me 

it feels like i keep running into a wall
no matter how much i seem to break down
it always seems to build back up brick by brick making the 
climb to the top impossible to reach

i feel suffocated 
unable to breath, unable to reach the surface 
im trapped 
trapped in disappointment of others

maybe one day i won't feel this way
but today, today feels like the world is ending 
and nobody seems to care who they hurt 
or damage in the inside

© 2011 Bianca La Salle


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trapped in disappointment of others.
Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think we have all been there,,I used to feel like a brick in a wall struggling to get to the top....or a leaf before fall, dreading the imminent drop....It was that ;WHY DON'T THEY UNDERSTAND' period of my life

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice feel of the imagination of agoney and disappointment......

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Bianca La Salle
Bianca La Salle

STOCKTON, CA



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