Soulmate

Soulmate

A Poem by Noodles
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A gentle song to those in love.

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I saw you sitting there alone
You were more beautiful than the great blue dome                           
Your heart was stolen by lies and truths
My heart was stolen by only you

Somewhere beneath the moonlit sky
Our fate so tightly intertwined
At that moment I had your smile
Engraved in my heart, your lullaby

The promises we kept was sealed by a kiss
A sweet lasting song upon your lips
Tell me the story of "You and Me"
How the blue songbirds sing in harmony

O' shooting star across the sky
Give me a long and hopeful ride
I've lost my heart to strong, true arms
Can't you see I long for its gentle warmth?

I saw you sitting all alone
A royal figure on your throne
My heart found upon your arms
Your lullaby found upon my heart

© 2012 Noodles


Author's Note

Noodles
It's my first so please go easy.

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Pretty good.
But you lost the rythm in the last stanza.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Noodles

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
what can i say ..... hm ..... good job , it's a nice poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


Noodles

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on August 27, 2012
Last Updated on August 27, 2012
Tags: smile, sky, love

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Noodles
Noodles

Philippines



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I'm a random person. Criticism is hard to take for me, but it's pretty good if it's said in a nice way. I believe in God and have a good relationship with Him. I don't like talking about myself much. .. more..

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