Perfect Fourth

Perfect Fourth

A Poem by df

a distance of four keys
your fingers cannot reach

yet i'd journey all eighty eight
to set your smile straight

© 2010 df


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this is what i call effortless and personal.... great job. you have a flair for words and it's much more than just talent. it's a special gift. it's like, even if there are less than twenty words to choose from, you'll still come up with something nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


short, yet sweet. Nice job. You have a lot of potential. Don't give up on your talent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I cannot but smile like a complete fool...your poem reminds me of another traveler of keys I once had the privilege to meet :) You mesmerize with the rare, ethereal fibers cast from the depths of your clearly lovely soul :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have a sweet spot in my heart for all things musical. So this piece earns it's spot. Nicely written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice poem - short and sweet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very kool-creative!!!
...i love this!!!!!

james:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 29, 2010
Last Updated on April 29, 2010
Tags: piano

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