Ah!

Don't tell them

Don't tell them about the burned sunflower field

that I found yesterday

on my way down

Don't tell them

about the tragic funeral

of my favorite teacher

Don't tell them

That I tore up my graduation dress

..for no reason.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Aw, this is so heartfelt and tragic. When you lose someone who helps build you up and head you towards your dreams later on in life. And some awful happens to them. You feel it deep within you as well. Profoundly expressed and beautifully done.

[goldenscar__]

that's why we need to teach our children not to rely on anyone.. no matter how dear they can ever be

[Onlyme]

Sadly that is so true. But then you run the risk of being so closed off. You only care about yourself and your own needs. And then the world is a lonely place. You have to find middle ground on this one. Care about yourself. But also about others too. If, you get my drift. But I understand perfectly what you mean.

[goldenscar__]

we, as women, Disney movies has taught us to always wait for the hero who is riding the white horse to save us and offer us a better life. We might have been fooled by that but since we are now aware of the fact that those dreams are crap,women should make a stand and rely on themselves; we shouldn't let our lil girls repeat the same mistake, that's what I meant. And as humans, we need people and people need us.

[Onlyme]

I understand you full sweetheart. And well said. I do agree. On what you're saying. Think we got a bit miscommunication on my part before.

[goldenscar__]

Thank you for always transferring good vibes through your nice words.

[Onlyme]

No problem. I am far from perfect at times. Bit of a twit at times actually. Ask my man. LOL

[wordman]

no,no you didn't tear your dress

[goldenscar__]

I had to tell my neighbor that.. she was trying to steal the glowing beads

[wordman]

that would be terrible,glowing beads are the best

[goldenscar__]

without the glowing beads, the dress wouldn't be beautiful

[wordman]

of course not,they would highlight the dress and the occupant

[goldenscar__]

I'm glad she doesn't know about it.. please don't tell her

[wordman]

my mouth is sealed,my heart tied,i will never tell,on a friend of mine...

[goldenscar__]

I'm sure...

[wordman]

and i wont tell bout you burning the poppy field

[goldenscar__]

Oh that wasn't me

[wordman]

of course it was

[goldenscar__]

how do you know?

[wordman]

i seen you,i was in the big oak tree

[goldenscar__]

I was told it was you who burned the poppy field.. I swear I didn't

[wordman]

you never know ,i am kinda magic

[goldenscar__]

there is nothing left to say.. you can't doubt people with magic in their veins

[wordman]

just like the song,i`m a magic man

[goldenscar__]

it's always like a song. Thanks

[wordman]

you`re welcome