let me know if you reach my voice

I don't feel no pain
I just want to meet you

I want to tell you about my evenings
and my grandma's mirror that makes me pretty

I want to talk to you
and walk with you
all night long

I want to look at your eyes
and see the world through them

I want to meet you
but you're too far away

and I don't have money for the bus fare.

Forgive me!

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A poem of longing which is tinged with sadness. A long time ago I didn't have the bus fare either. I can remember how I felt.

Chris

[goldenscar__]

I'm so sorry for making you feel that way.. again.

[Chris Shaw]

No need to be sorry. Your poem spoke to me. That is a positive thing, not a negative :))

[goldenscar__]

thank you.. hugs

[wordman]

down to earth and direct,a true story for many

[goldenscar__]

thank you, it is indeed.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Onlyme]

This is sweet but also heartbreaking. So many different meanings you could take from this. Wanting to see your boyfriend to tell him about your day. Or wanting to visit your grandmother at her home. But she lives so far away.

[goldenscar__]

Thank you dear, it's always nice to hear your thoughts about my stuff. hugs