Save our Souls

we talk about God like we know him
like he likes human blood flowing
i know we growing and
things are moving slowly but
atleast we going
somewhere
somewhere could turn out to be anywhere
even hell
cant u see?
we getting closer and closer every year
no one values what he gave us
cos no one knows the difference
so many preaching
how come no one's here
how come no one hears
whats the difference
between ios and andriod
thats the difference
between grace giving and what you can afford
"forgive us and give us more"
i hear people complaining
"come closer"
i hear God saying but
no one is listening
we lost focus
no ideas no direction
mirrors under the sun
yet man only studies reflections
striving for perfection
we lost sanity for vanity
i think we lost control
wanna test gravity?
pick up your son and throw
rabbits cant dig
dats how deep life goes
can you feel it?
the title of this poem is sAVE our souls
wish my life was a computer
control z would just undo
but life is a computer
control z is in the bible
the more you go is the more you know and the more u know is the more you grow
but when knowledge itself is expensive
what can a honest man do
life is not dat important
my soul is
others stand at attention
i stand at ease
i surrender please
save our souls

Reviews

[Nebunova]

my friend, you have much wisdom to say and i can feel the passion with every line. please, don't stop writing, even if one person reads your work, thats one more person that is more aware of the corrupt world we're living in and the importance of our souls. Nigeria and other countries suffering will be at peace. in time. i know its hard, but as long as your keep your faith, a promising tomorrow is always guaranteed.

[Sel Sense]

'the more you go is the more you know and the more u know is the more you grow'
totally agree with Nebunova. i can feel your passion.

[drstone]

i hope people like my poem online cos its getting fraustrating out here. Nigerians dont read and i have alot to say...