Free yourself

Knife in hand, imagine the blood
I can't stand, this isn't good.
Forget the wrist, do it right
You know you want it, take your life.
Take a seat, let it rest
close your eyes, take a breath.
Exhale, press down
Lie still, lie down.
Relax, you're free
-exactly what you wanted to be.

Reviews

[Rain]

This piece has a haunting realism to it. Short in length, but very powerful in content. Rain..

[Last Lying Look]

This flowed excellently and made for an interesting read.
Great poem!

-E.R