Sweet nothings

Words spoken by your love are so sweet....

A secret spoken sweet, honey whispered. 

I listened, ears drinking every syllable, 

heart intoxicated with her words.  

There was none else in that crowded room, 

there was now only a couch for two. 

Intently I focused, every meaning deciphered, 

as she continued her melodic literation, 

greedily I imbibed those promises of love, 

those sweet nothings, 

except they weren't empty to me, 

these were auditory treasures, 

now locked away in my psyche, 

later on in the wee hours of the morning, 

I would gladly rehearse.   

Author's Note

A good word spoken is water to a dying soul...

Reviews

[Tumi]

The poem describes a deeply intimate moment between two people, focusing on the power of sweet, meaningful words shared in a crowded room. The speaker feels captivated and fully absorbed in the conversation, likening her words to treasures that will be cherished and remembered later. It emphasizes the significance of connection and the impact of love expressed through language.
Very Good, Well crafted

[Dave W.]

Thank you Tumi, I always appreciate your reviews.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Fabulous write Dave
How are you these days ?

[Dave W.]

I am good thankyou for asking

[ETERNITY]

Wonderful poetry relates and this so related. So many guys need to learn a few things from you. The final line especially touched me because we females do wonder if our guy thinks about what we've said...or maybe you are the one in a million. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.

[Dave W.]

Okay you want to hear something weird, I just reviewed one of your poems at the same time you reviewed this. Thank you for the review.

[ETERNITY]

that's cool! (:

[Dave W.]

you know what's colder than cold?

[ETERNITY]

Please tell me ...I think?

[Dave W.]

Ice cold....alright, alright, alright.....sorry please forgive me for this bad joke

[ETERNITY]

er...mmmm...yeah, I get it (eyes rolling) Thanks (:

[Dave W.]

I will see myself out

[Kelly Scheppers]

Those sweet nothings weren't empty to you, they were treasures...and they will replay in your mind, running circles in your head, as you drink in every syllable. Nice to meet you, Dave!

[Dave W.]

Ditto dude

[Dave W.]

Also thank you so.much for the review

[Kelly Scheppers]

You're welcomed! No one has ever called me "dude" before. Lol, first time for everything! ; )

[Dave W.]

It just my saying, I know it's a little nerdy, I hope you have a great day

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thanks,dude!

[Dave W.]

Yep now I feel like a nerd

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lol, it's ok. We're good!

[Chris]

Hurt-full words - we MAY forgive but never truly forget. The sweet-nothings ones are our emotional support as well as how we are bound with their speaker.

[Dave W.]

There is alot of truth in what you wrote thank you

[Chris]

Hi Dave. This was a thought-full subject.

[Soren]

In deed it is. This poem captures the heart. Words mean more than often thought. Well written and well organized this poem conveys the feeling. Wonderfully said

[Dave W.]

Thank you very much for the review.