the sweet taste of your hell

the sweet taste of your hell

A Poem by dutch2lips
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horror, poem

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Picture: 'Morbid' by Oskaline




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fluently entering your mind
sneaking sips of your fear
your death would be too kind
I think I will keep you near
.
.
I love it, how your voice
reach that inhuman height
the tender meat is my choice
I linger on each little bite
.
.
.
licking the constant stream
warm blood with iron taste
our duet, my bite, your scream
together perfectly paced
.
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I love it,  how you moan
the terror in your eyes
tearing your flesh from bone
lying between your thighs
.
.
.
hot damp air escapes
while I'm eating your skin
creating such cute shapes
so delicate and thin
.
.
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I need to pause a while
can't have you passing out
it makes it all worthwhile
feasting as you shout
.
.
.
gorging on your chest
I noticed with dismay
while chewing on your breast
you finally passed away
.
.
.
licking off my fingers
I sit and rest a spell
your taste on me still lingers
the sweet taste of your hell
.
.
.

© 2011 dutch2lips


Author's Note

dutch2lips
Please be so kind as to leave some kind of comment, it would be appreciated by me!

Written October 23rd, 2006

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I love it, how you moan
the terror in your eyes
tearing your flesh from bone
lying between your thighs

Necrophilia sprang to mind at this point but find later on she doesn't pass away till the breasts are chewed lol. This is a deeply disturbingly dark piece I LOVED IT lol. You rivet the reader to the spot like a ghoul trying to look away but can't afraid of missing the end. Keep em' coming

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dark....I like this. The space between each stanza was a bit too much for me and took the impact away from the poem, or else it would have been darker. Otherwise this is very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it, how you moan
the terror in your eyes
tearing your flesh from bone
lying between your thighs

Necrophilia sprang to mind at this point but find later on she doesn't pass away till the breasts are chewed lol. This is a deeply disturbingly dark piece I LOVED IT lol. You rivet the reader to the spot like a ghoul trying to look away but can't afraid of missing the end. Keep em' coming

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pretty good, creepy, horrific definately, but good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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